amelie

The orange superman

One day superman was flying through the air, and when he was up in the air he got sunburnt
and he turned orange. Before very long he found a tortoise trapped and he was stuck, so superman came down from the air. The golden sun was still shining on superman and he helped the tortoise.
After a while superman got the tortoise and went in the shade. As time passed it turned dark so they went to sleep in the morning they found it funny because they were wet.

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One thought on “amelie

  1. Hi Amelie
    What an original idea, an orange superman with a sun tan! You had a great start to your story but I think you would have a better ending if you had planned it first.
    Miss T

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