100 word challenge The Mysterious Boots By Jennifer

The mysterious boot
Skipping over the hills, Emily spotted a pair of boots sticking up out of a puddle. She was flabbergasted but nevertheless she sprinted over the hills to tell her mum. Astonished, they ran quickly over to the puddle so as to get the boots out. Unfortunately the boots refused to come out. After their 3rd attempt they called Emily’s dad to come and help them. He came immediately so they started to tug at the boots. Eventually the boot wriggled! They gave it 1 last try and the person came out! It was a scarecrow!

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2 thoughts on “100 word challenge The Mysterious Boots By Jennifer

  1. Jennifer you have made some very good word choices, particularly using “nevertheless”. Good stuff! However…..remember your target is to use a wide variety of connectives, this is still something that will make your writing even better.
    Aim to do that next week.
    Miss T

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