by James A 100wc

He was shocked to find that there was a wolf in the sack. A big teenaged one with lean, muscly legs, jet black fur and ruby red eyes. The Lord ordered his guards to leave him and the wolf alone. The animal terrified as it should be this man had obviously no trouble killing anything. “I wonder why you are here wolf” he sniggered “I think I should give you name oh I now Shadow Kill since you killed many of my robots”. The wolf (Shadow Kill) wasn’t liking this at all he need to escape or he would die…..


4 thoughts on “by James A 100wc

  1. Well done. You have choses to use some strong words to help tell your story. I really like the word sniggered.

  2. I like the way you continue the story and leave the reader wanting to know more.
    Keep up the good work.

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