100wc by Harry D

As the boat began to rock and roll, the storm raged in the exotic land of nothing but trees in the beautiful horizon and square miles of black old water. All the people sailing across the ocean were being smacked from side to side of the huge heavy ship, the cargo on the ship being tossed around like a throwing ball, but as the fishing net snapped the captain shouted “STEER THE SHIP!” but no one could hear him, as the people kept being thrown around by the harsh black water. Frothing and gurgling, the crew were dead!

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2 thoughts on “100wc by Harry D

  1. I love the idea of “the exotic land of nothing but trees”, very poetic. Good use of direct speech from the captain, I can hear him roar in desperation!

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