jono 100wc

100 word challenge

28th of March 2012 – I was on a boat fishing in the ocean. Ten days later we saw a storm up ahead. It was getting closer and closer and just about 20 minutes later we were in the storm. There were big waves and rain they just keep on coming and then there was a bigger wave than the other waves but when we got to the top we made it we were so happy that we were cheering but there was an giant wave we were scared after it hit us we open our eyes and we were on an island.

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3 thoughts on “jono 100wc

  1. Jono, I am so proud of you writing this all by yourself. You have a great idea with the character fishing but ending up shipwrecked, that would be my biggest nightmare!
    Miss T

  2. Hello Jono,
    Your story is believable and exciting! I can see that you thought through each event in the adventure. I really appreciate all the feelings you express as the story unfolds.
    A great example is how you show the excitement of getting to the top of the wave by everyone cheering.

  3. Hi John,

    I enjoyed reading your story.
    I think you were one of the lucky ones to survive this raging storm! Keep up the good work!

    I look forward to reading more adventures from you in the New Year.
    Happy Christmas!

    Mrs Boyce @ Team 100 WC
    Cork, Ireland
    Come and visit our Class Blog at http://kidblog.org/MrsBoycesClass-4/

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