The Bermuda Triangle

As our ship sailed across the border, rocks clashed against it. The weather was raging at us. There was a storm, a big one. We were inside the Bermuda Triangle. It was so foggy that we could barely see the deck. We all stood still, So did the boat. Then suddenly, as if the sea was angry with us, the whole boat shook so hard that my whole crew fell off. They were never seen again. The boat crashed on the rocks. I was on an island, and I was dead for sure……

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3 thoughts on “The Bermuda Triangle

  1. Hi Beau,

    I enjoyed reading your story.
    I loved the calm before the storm. Your use of short sentences when describing the silence was very clever. I hope you survived! Keep up the good work!

    I look forward to reading more adventures from you in the New Year.
    Happy Christmas!

    Mrs Boyce @ Team 100 WC
    Cork, Ireland
    Come and visit our Class Blog at http://kidblog.org/MrsBoycesClass-4/

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