The murderer and the bench! by RW

A stone faded bench which once was bright and colourful sat alone surrounded by the trees on the side of a track. Abandoned on the track since time began, the bench had seen many things including a male murderer who was breathless as he ran away. He had to have a rest so he sat on the bench, he thought he had escaped but he hadn’t he had been court and killed by the person who was chasing him. The bench was devastated he only liked kind people, like religious people. After the funeral people where placing flowers and cards all over the bench .

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2 thoughts on “The murderer and the bench! by RW

  1. You have used good words such as breathlessly,devastated. Also you have used phrases like: a stone faded bench which once was bright and colourful sat alone surrounded by the trees on the side of a track. Abandoned on the track since time began. Since time began is a good describing word because it tells you how long it`s been there. GGN

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