100 wc by hollyw

Happily playing with my best friend Amelie after school,we played hide and seek. Afterwards we went to the park, meanwhile my mum was making an amazing colossal cake. It was covered with dark chocolate ganash with the finest strawberries . We were having fun however we couldnt wait until we got are hands on the cake. Also, we were going to have a party so we rushed home as quick as possible.Amelie and I were there within a minute. We went to get a biscuit out of the cuboard. Suprisingly a kitten leaped out. We were allowed to keep it and we fed it but in 2013 our cat died.

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  1. Hi Holly. Well done with your use of connectives – have you been learning about them? You have a good range, but don’t over do them! I like the description of the chocolate cake – it sounds delicious!
    Well done for entering the 100 Word Challenge this week.
    Miss Willing, Team 100wc
    Huntingdon, England

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