As I sat down in the dark corner, hugging my legs, the ground shook like it never had before. I stood up. Ash lay everywhere; people were screaming. Lava gushed down Mount Vesuvius as I got to the door. I was standing there with a blank face. Stones were hurling from the sky, hitting people on the head. Lava filled the streets. I tried going out but it was far too hot so I sprinted to the attic. It was dark. I heard bangs and rumbles which deafened me. I wondered what would happen next. Then I noticed lava leaking into the room…
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Fantastic! I really enjoyed reading your writing. From the very beginning I was drawn into your story. Your descriptive language and your vocabulary choices are really impressive.
Well done!
Miss Brogan (Team 100wc)
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That was amazing! well done for getting the showcase you deserved it. well done :]
Wow! these is amazing this is the best 100wc in moths.HL
Congratulations on having your writing showcased! Please have a look at some of our entries…http://kidblog.org/Mrs_Illume/tag/100wc-entry/
Mrs Tucker, 100WC Team, Wirral, UK.