We were at the edge, the forest seemed alive as if there was movement but it was night so who or what was it? There was a rustle and something poked its head out, it looked slightly distress and then all of a sudden it launched an attack on us it was … an ork! It was slashing and screeching for help as it slowly perished. Suddenly another then another came out, there was loads of orks they flew out of their trees calling and calling but we were to strong they all perished away, but then only then the most humongous ork came out of the trees killing everything in his path. “who is responsible for this?” he bellowed with his deep voice. We turned and then ran. The chase was on! What will happen next?
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This is avery good piece of writting. This could win the show case for you. make sure you keep wrighting from George M 🙂 😉
I like the way you started with that puestion mark at the end of the sentence.
Hi Cameron,
Thank you for your entry this week! You have used a great range of vocabulary to make your story come alive! I have now learnt work a ork is and they look scary!
Great work!
*Great range of wow words
*Good use of high level punctuation
#Could use some more high level vocab
Great story cameron ! by Alex