Tom was running through the forest as quickly as he could, he was a playing it with his friend Hugo and he was it! Tom kept on running until he was out of sight, then he stopped, “paint, paint” painted Tom. He looked back at the view of sight; all he could see was the dark forest trees, suddenly the forest seemed alive as a ghostly horror place! “Hugo, Hugo “echoed Tom “help, help “echoed Tom again. But nothing happened “hey, Tom I heard you calling me” said Hugo “AAAHHH” yelled Tom “whose there “shouted Tom” it’s just me Hugo “replied Hugo “” oh Hugo “said Tom
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Oh, my! It seems like that was a creepy situation to be in!
Be sure to proofread your work. You have some spelling and punctuation mistakes which are easy to make while writing, but you can usually spot them when reading over your work.
Keep practicing!