100 word challenge
2014 7th of October
Paradise
Suddenly I was able to see again. After all these years in the darkness ,I finally stepped into the light.I had found my paradise!
A shallow lake,fish jumping up and down.So quiet,such calmness,it was so peaceful!
Rose and Lilac dancing in the sunshine.Besides all this there was a small waterfall with a silent yet beautiful river at he bottom.In the distance I saw a mountain with a light blanket of snow at its peak.
White cliffs on the side of my paradise island,I wish this moment could last forever but it was time to go.
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Welcome to Horsebridge's blog 
What a lovely take on the prompt Beau.
You have used some fantastic sentences openers, conjunctions and punctuation to engage your reader and keep them hooked. I love the sentence ‘After all these years in the darkness, I finally stepped into the light.’
Nest time you write, try to use some complex sentences to develop your ideas further.
Keep writing,
Miss Gray